dude23's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[{DK} GliTcH]

Nice

Not too much to it, but I enjoyed it. Very ambient. Good work on the drums.

Kuma-AKA responds:

Thank you very much :)

[DJ Babokon - Edge (Piano)]

Needs more texture.

Some notes:

There weren't any wrong notes in the piano part, but I feel that some of the notes should be changed.

The piano parts overlap. I would never recommend using the paino as the bass, melody, and rhythm in a song. It just doesn't work.

Also, this isn't a song. A song has more substance. If you were to add drums, bass, or some synth pads/strings, and make it more complicated, it would be a song.

Keep working.

DJ-Babokon responds:

Yah. I don't really care, but i'll work on it. thanks for the advice.

-DJ Babokon

EDIT: I finished!

[~DT~ Inebriated]

Not bad.

For the sake of being constructive, I might recommend varying the drum fills, instead of using the same fill. I might also recommend making the melody a little louder or more powerful. Overall I enjoyed you ideas.

Also, if I were you, I might add some more to the bridge-like section at 2:03.

Nice dude.

DeatHTaX responds:

I tried messin around with it a lot more, but i just couldnt nail anything that i seemed to like. I mean it's probly one of my more decent songs for having only worked on it for about 2 hours, but yeah, definitely could've used some more variation. What can i say, i'm pretty lazy lol :D

But hey, glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the feedback

[Beat it-Metaljonus]

A bit slow.

I think it should be sped up a little bit. I also didn't enjoy the obnoxious guitar playing. I didn't find it very musical, although the guitar playing is good.

Basically, this doesn't mean anything to me.

+6 points for guitar talent.

Metaljonus responds:

If it does'nt mean anything to you why even fucking review? pffh I swear people are dumb.

[Wishing Star]

Pretty Cool

Good dynamic flow, cool beat, nice breaks . . . I really liked the beginning . . . I think this song works as it is, but I could see a classical version of this sounding amazing. I think if you were to have it all on piano (no rhythm), slower, and with some cool piano runs to make it connect, it would be ballin'. There is a lot of potential for the melody, and I think you could do a lot of different things with it.

You should really write more original songs, you're pretty clever with how you put together songs. I'd be interested what you think of some of my latest songs I put out here, if you get a chance.

This song is enhancing my delta brain waves, LOL. I'm getting kinda drowsy and euphoric.

VGSongbird responds:

Well don't get TOO high on this song ;)

Yeah, I originally had this as just pure, slow piano. But I couldn't for the life of me complete it! I had this loop stuck in my head so long, I just wanted to put it down on a track, and it kind of evolved into this. I may just revisit it; it seems to be getting a lot more attention than I thought it would.

Thanks for your 8 and for your review ^_^

[Pico groove (Pico day)]

Not bad!

Good motific development, especially rhythmically. I like how the main melody is only two notes, but with varied rhythmic placement. I think if you developed that more it would be awesome, especially in the second half of the song.

hopeku responds:

I will probably work one something bigger instead of working that song out, but thanks man!

[work in progress... big time!]

Ignore the star rating

Do some more with it.

elxyer responds:

thanks :D
i'll try mixi'n it up a bit but i guess i just need more practice
Thanks for the support! :D

[Darkness -BG]

Sad, but . . .

good. lol. Yeah, I guess I would say what most others are saying here, to expand on this, which apparently you already are. There was part in the guitar part I wasn't wild about at about 0:26 to 0:28, pretty minor, but if you like it, I'd say keep it in. That's all really. Cool man.

loansindi responds:

Thanks for the review.

This track is very much on the back burner.

[Lugia - Cover (Request)]

Not bad for a quick "throw together" song

I just saw the forum post and decided to check this out. I think it would be important to say that I haven't heard the original song, so my opinion may be off point at times. I think if you worked a little bit more on the drums and adding some more variety it could be much more enjoyable. It would probably be cool to hear some cool chords behind the melody also. I think it would be cool to have the chords kick in at 0:24 where the melody restarts, and maybe have a drum fill that leads into it. If that makes any sense to you. I'll check out some of your other stuff and see what else you got goin on.

loansindi responds:

Hey, thanks for the review.

I had fiddled with tryin to make a couple other drum sounds, but didn't catch anything that was really satisfactory so I let it be.

I was experimenting with some harmonies/supporting chords briefly, but then decided that putting together a convincing chord progression around a melody that was already written was outside the scope of this project.

[Super Mario Bros. (Punk Remix)]

OK i guess

I really didn't like the chords behind the melody too much, or the progression of the song. I think it is kinda clumsily put together.

giftedbuttwisted responds:

Hmm any specific reasons?