dude23's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[{SoulX} Dream Train]

kinda cool kinda boring

good effects tho

DragonsoulX responds:

Thanks. i guess. lol, well anywho ty for the review.

[Awesome Face]

OK . . .

Solo could use work, timing could use some work too. Maybe intonation as well, something seems off.

MormoMaker responds:

ok, thanks for the comment! i will work on it.

[({[B33P]})]

Cool

very creative how you used a heart monitor like sound as a melody. Fix the melody and the monitor sound so they line up though, it kinda sounds sloppy when they have strange harmonies or unintentional harmonies and don't line up rhythmically.

mcsurge45 responds:

I can't fix anything because I lost the FL editing file
sorry

[Serenity (Demo)]

Cool man. Here it goes . . .

Maybe turn up the bass some. I can barely hear it. At 1:30 turn up the bass (I think that's when it comes in anyway, and I think the sound will fill up. If I were you, I would add a bridge where the song ends, then towards the end of the bridge, have rhythmic fill to kick off the A section again, but when the A section starts off again, add some instrument or synth as a solo maybe. A simple yet catchy solo. In a lot of popular songs when the last section of the song arrives the singer kinda riffs over the song. I don't know, we might be completely different types of artists or see things differently. I guess that's what I would do. Also, maybe add a melody. You have a melody that comes in at 37 seconds, maybe you should carry that over or a variation of that melody or 1:30. I kind-of suck at explaining things, so please excuse my rough critique. I'd appreciate if you gave me a critique also on my recent dance/techno tunes, you seem to have a good feel of how things should work. Well, I hope it helps, lol . . .

Dj-Felix responds:

Thank you for the kind review. With the bass, do you have a subwoofer perhaps? Because i do and i can hear it quite fine, but sure, i'll try turning it up (until it gets too loud that it distorts). But anyways, thank you for the ideas. And yes, ill head off now and see what your music is like.

[Nintendo Concerto Pt3 (17min)]

This isn't all MIDI is it?

It sounds like it . . . lol.

darphfluffy responds:

haha shhh!

[>'`'=-.,Paino Thing,.-='`'<]

Kinda wack

Not very pleasing to the ears, and I like late John Coltrane. Too many pianos, lol. I'd concentrate on fixing some of the harmonies. I don't know how to explain what I'm thinking other than by saying I can tell you don't know what you're doing exactly at this moment in time. Also, the switch between Major and minor (or blues) feels a little weird. Work on the melody.

Zombiebones responds:

Thanks, this advice will help help quite a bit.

[Spaceship SFX]

Wow

That's you're voice, huh? Damn.

themanthelegend responds:

Yeah, I can do some random stuff. Who knows what might come out of me next..... Maybe some poop :)

[From the Foreshadows (A->N)]

Awesome

Congrats on best of the week. I agree with Xenose (below). Keep it up, and check out some of my newer stuff if you have a chance.

ApproachingNirvana responds:

Thanks for the review, we'll check it out when we get a chance!

[The rain will never stop]

O.K. this is money.

LOL, i skipped to the middle of the song and I was like, o.k. this kid knows the deal. Very good, catchy, and marketable. DUDE I need some pointers in FL studio, there is a lot I still don't know how to do in that program and it sounds like you got the fruity skillz. PM me if you have free time and would like to help me out. Awesome song (I listened to the whole thing btw).

Ozzy93 responds:

ill PM you when i have freetime. (Exams OMG)

Thanks ;D

[Kanon in C# (Canon in D remix)]

Strange

I don't know, lol, I get what you're doing, but I just don't really like it. I'm gonna check out some of your other stuff so I can have a more objective point of view though. If you want you can get me back and tell me how much you hate some of my songs. lol ;)

Ozzy93 responds:

well i guess thats ok...